어차피 애니화될거 전혀 번역할 생각 없었는데 사사사 가족 나오는 파트가 너무 궁금해서 서칭질하다가 발견
이전에 올라왔다던 영역 전문은 다 지워지고 나루토 위키아에는 아직 줄거리 업뎃도 안 되어있고...
메이저를 덕질해도 자급자족이라니 이런 삶은 모 이야다
스스로 일본어보다 영어를 더 못하고 싫어한다고 생각했는데 한자밭에서 구르다가 알파벳 보니까 왠지 반갑네요...(...) 못하는건 맞긴 하지만...
and I also 한. 자. 싫. 어
!!!) 원문 자료가 없는 상태로, 여러 차례 중역된 글을 또다시 중역하는 번역본입니다. 원문과 사용 단어, 의미, 상세상황 등이 크고 작게 차이날 수 있으므로 본 번역본을 감상하시는 분들께서는 참고하시기 바랍니다. 특히 대명사 사용 부분에서 인물 지칭 오류가 발생할 수 있으니 주의 바랍니다.
더불어 본인의 영역 실력이 크게 떨어져 문장이 매우 어색하므로 주의 바랍니다.
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* 원작에 대한 이해가 완전치 않습니다.
특히 술법 등에 관한 이해도가 떨어지며, 때문에 온전치 않은 번역이 진행될 수도 있습니다.
* 의역이 존재합니다.
원문에 온전히 맞지 않더라도 어려운 단어, 관용구 등이 나오면 풀어 쓰거나 한국어로 치환할 수 있으며, 제시되는 상황의 뉘앙스에 따라 완전히 직역되지 않은 번역을 내놓을 수 있습니다. 웬만하면 직역을 진행며, 오역에 가까운 의역이 존재할 수 있습니다.
* 오역/오타가 존재할 수 있습니다.
원어를 스스로 번역 후 웹 번역기, 사전, 맞춤법 검사기 등을 이용하여 지속적으로 퇴고하는 방식을 사용중입니다. 다만 일어를 깊게 배운 적이 없고 손으로 직접 타이핑하며 업로드하는 관계로 이에 따른 오역, 오타가 존재할 수 있습니다.
* 오역, 오타 지적 및 더 나은 번역문 제안 등은 늘 감사히 받아들이고 있습니다.
Page 7
Kakashi: We haven’t met in a long time. Shouldn’t you give me a high five?
Sasuke: There’s no need.
Sasuke ignores Kakashi’s high five and was ready to leave, but Kakashi grabs his shoulder.
Sasuke: What, is there anything else?
Kakashi: Just hold on for a bit. Is this about you traveling alone? Have you talked to someone about this?
Sasuke: I have talked to someone about this.
Kakashi: With who?
Sasuke looks at Kakashi silently without any expression.
Sasuke: With Aoda (the name here is in Chinese and my roommate doesn’t watch Naruto so we are just guessing because it refers to a summon)
Kakashi: …That’s a snake.
Sasuke: Well, he told me happily that his great-grandson is now longer than him.
Kakashi: Oh, really. /sarcasm
Page 8
Kakashi: Think about it more… has there anyone who has taught you anything before?
Sasuke: Itachi and that idiot. (My roommate says this is a bad translation on the part of the person who posted it)
Kakashi: Oh? Okay, who else?
Sasuke: My father taught me Katon.
Kakashi: Okay, okay, who else?
Sasuke: I guess Orochimaru.
Kakashi: Him?
Sasuke: Though I guess rather than saying he taught me, I stole from him.
Kakashi: What about Chidori? Hello? Don’t you remember Chidori?
Sasuke: Well, since you aren’t married, I’ve never thought about talking to you about anything.
Page 9
Kakashi: It is true that I don’t understand how hard it is to be a parent, but I have this.
Kakashi pulls out a book.
Sasuke: This is… Icha Icha Paradise…
Kakashi: This is my most treasured book. To me, it is the guidebook for life.
Sasuke: Lame.
Kakashi gets really emotional and rebuts:
Kakashi: It’s not lame. If you want to break the ice with your daughter, you need this, Icha Icha Paradise.
Sasuke: This kind of book?
Kakashi: Yes. Let me give you the secrets of Icha Icha Paradise. #1 is….
Page 10
Sasuke leaves Kakashi and returns to his previous spot. He looks for Sarada in the crowd.
Sarada: Oh there you are!
Sarada squeezes through the crowd and goes to Sasuke.
Sarada: Oh my god, can you just not disappear like that? You aren’t a kid anymore.
Sarada sighs with her hands on her hips.
Sarada: Well, I guess it was also my fault that I walked away without a word.
Sarada sees that her dad doesn’t react.
Sarada: Dad?
Hearing “dad” gets his attention.
Sasuke looks into her eyes while he remembers what Kakashi says.
Sasuke flashing back to his convo with Kakashi
–
Kakashi: If you want to break the ice between two people, the most important thing is what you call them. You need to have an intimate pet name, for example “-chan.” For example, between oniisan and oniichan, of course oniichan is more intimate. Have you ever called anyone “-chan” before? Like Sakura? No right? Well, at this point you don’t have to change how you call Sakura. Anyway, you can start to use cute pet names. For example, you call Naruto idiot (usuratonkachi), which is intimate. Hey, why are you looking at me with disgust? Anyway, just try that with your daughter.
–
Sasuke: Little peanut
Sarada: ……..Huh?
Sasuke: You are my kawaii peanut.
Page 11
Sarada: What (the fuck)?
Kawaii peanut is a line from Icha Icha Paradise, but Sarada doesn’t know that.
Sarada: I’m not a peanut…
Because Sasuke just stole the line from the book, he’s not sure how to react to Sarada nor does he really understand what the pet name means. While Sasuke is wasting time trying to think of the plan B Kakashi taught him…
Sarada: By the way…
Sarada is reminded of something and becomes even more disturbed.
Sarada: What (the fuck) is small peanut? Dad, you haven’t even said my name once today. Could it be that you not only forgot where home is, but also your daughter’s name?
Sasuke: What are you talking about Sarada?
Sarada: Oh – I guess you remember.
Page 12
Sasuke walks towards Sarada.
Sasuke: …..
Sasuke takes off his jacket and puts it around her shoulders.
Sarada: ….. What? I’m not cold.
Sasuke: Hang onto it.
Not knowing what her dad means, Sarada scrunches her eyebrow.
And this is what Kakashi learned from Icha Icha Paradise: that the guy puts his jacket around the girl, and the girl will definitely go doki doki (will be moved).
The crowd watches the scene.
Passerby 1: Oh my god, this is so cute
Passerby 2: Yeah, it’s like how you see what dad is wearing and you want to wear it too.
Passerby 3: But, the sizing isn’t right… right?
Hearing the crowd, Sasuke looks down at his daughter. Sarada glances down at herself. Fat sleeves, crumpled shoulders, jacket as tall as she is – it is not her size at all.
Sarada: ……
Without saying anything Sarada takes off the jacket and tosses it back to Sasuke. Sasuke, without resisting, catches the jacket. Sarada walks towards the crowd. Before she is engulfed by the crowd, she says.
Sarada: Today, Papa is really annoying.
NARUTO SHINDEN PAGES 13-21 TRANSLATION
Thanks again to my roommate who was clutch and translated this for me from the Chinese translation! She doesn’t have any experience with Naruto so some translations may reflect this, notably page 21.
ETA: I’ve made some slight edits since first posting this so you may see different versions of p.21 floating around
Page 13
Kakashi: Annoying?
Kakashi laughs so hard that it could be heard across dimensions. Sasuke goes back to the bridge after he’s abandoned by his daughter, where he sees Kakashi waiting there, laughing.
Kakashi: Aiya, it’s obvious that you two are blood related. Both of you are such squares. Yeah, very obviously blood related, mhm.
Sasuke: That book… called something passion… do you still have it?
Kakashi: Ah, this person… it’s Icha Icha Paradise! Icha Icha Paradise! Of course I have it. What’s up now? Could it be… you finally realize the power of Icha Icha Paradise?
Kakashi asks this with a big grin, feeling like he has a new comrade who will appreciate the Icha Icha series with him.
Sasuke replies instantly.
Sasuke: Give it to me. I’m going to throw it in the river.
Kakashi, just as he was taking the book out, stops halfway, sadly.
Kakashi: You are so cruel. Icha Icha Paradise was written before this child was born. It’s a little outdated, even for your generation.
Sasuke: What needs to be thrown into the river is not the book, Kakashi, it’s you.
Kakashi: Very true, but you need to calm down. Why don’t we jump down together. When our bodies reach the ocean, it’ll be an infamous mystery.
Page 14
Kakashi: It’ll probably be easier if you ask someone with a daughter, like Naruto.
Sasuke: Not that guy, he’s busy.
Kakashi: Yeah… he has been pretty busy recently. The agricultural industry is developing really well and a lot of people are settling in the (wood?) village. He has a lot more burdens than I did when I was the Hokage.
Sasuke: No, I don’t mean that. I saw him with his daughter just now.
Kakashi: Oh, I guess you can’t discuss this with him then. Huh… other people with daughters… Kurenai… ahh, that’s another person who can help you.
Kakashi looks at the other end of the bridge. Sasuke follows his gaze. It’s Choji and his daughter. They are eating chips as they walk towards Kakashi and Sasuke.
ChoCho: Ahh! The Sixth! Sarada’s dad!
Kakashi: Ahh, Parent’s Day was really fun huh? Excuse me, can you give me a chip?
ChoCho: Sure, here you go.
ChoCho gives Kakashi a potato chip.
Sasuke thinks, where have I seen them? Searching his memory for the name. This is almost impossible, but
Sasuke: …I remember now, you’re Choji. I didn’t recognize you now that you’re thinner, you used to look more like a fat–
While Sasuke was going to say pig, Kakashi threw something into his mouth as quickly as possible. It’s a potato chip. Sasuke makes eye contact with Kakashi, asking him nonverbally, what are you doing?
Kakashi also replies nonverbally, saying read the atmosphere.
Sasuke wants to say something, but it’s hard to do so with the potato chip in his mouth, so for convenience, he chews it first.
Choji: ………?
Looking at the two communicating nonverbally, Choji gets confused.
Page 15
The atmosphere is really awkward.
Kakashi: hahahaha (he laughs nervously)… this guy just wants to have a good relationship with his daughter and he was looking for parents with daughters Sarada’s age when you guys came.
Choji: If you want to have a good relationship with your daughter, isn’t the only thing you have to do is eat chips together? Not only chips, but also eating other delicious things together is really good.
Kakashi smiles while nodding, and when he looks at Sasuke, he becomes serious instantly.
Kakashi: ….but.
Sasuke takes a deep breath. He brings up delicious foods, but Sasuke doesn’t even know what Sarada likes. He just knows that she hates tomatoes.
Choji: About Sarada, rather than talking to me, I think there’s one person who is the most suitable.
Sasuke furrows his brows in surprise and looks at Kakashi questioningly.
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사스케는 홀로 문 앞에 서서 초인종을 눌렀다.
"네, 나가요!"
초인종이 울린 뒤, 사스케는 사쿠라의 목소리를 들었다. 잠시후, 문이 열린다. 사쿠라는 사스케의 얼굴을 보았다.
"아..."
사스케를 보고 나서, 사쿠라는 잠시 멍해졌다. 그때문에 사쿠라가 열었던 문은 점점 닫히기 시작했다. 문이 완전히 닫히기 전에, 사쿠라는 재빨리 문을 열지만 사스케를 빤히 보느라 문 손잡이를 놓는 것을 잊는다. 잠시 후, 사쿠라는 손잡이를 놓는다. 사쿠라는 사스케가 복도를 지날 수 있도록 뒷짐을 지며 수줍게 뒤로 물러났다.
"당신, 어서와."
가벼운 바람이 집 안에 불면서, 사쿠라의 머리카락은 바람을 타고 흔들렸다.
"아, 그래. 다녀왔어."
오랫동안 하지 않았던 말을 한 뒤에야, 사스케는 마침내 집에 돌아온듯한 기분을 느꼈다.
"나뭇잎 마을에 돌아왔다고 사라다한테서 들었는데, 사라다랑 같이 들어오질 않아서 조금 걱정했어."
집 안으로 들어오면서 사쿠라는 말했다.
"오는 길에 여러가지 일이 있었다."
사스케는 집이 어디였는지 잊었다는 것을 솔직 고백하려 하지 않았고, 그렇기에 사스케는 다른 일들에 대한 것으로 이야기를 계속했다.
"사라다는 돌아왔나?
"조금 전에 돌아오긴 했는데, 곧바로 나가버렸어. 엄청 화난 것처럼 보였는데. 저녁 준비좀 도와달라 하려 했건만."
"...... 정말인가?"
사쿠라는 부엌으로 향했고 사스케는 탁자 앞으로 걸어가 멈춘다.
사쿠라와 사라다의 사진.
어렸을 적의 제7반 사진.
그리고, 이전에 찍었던 가족사진.
사스케가 마지막으로 사진을 찍었던 때로부터 매우 긴 시간이 지났다, 그래서
"아버님, 조금만 더 웃어주세요~"
"더 행복해보이게~"
"더 웃어주세요, 좀 더 자연스럽게~"
"...... 어쩜 그렇게 무표정하실 수 있나요?"
사진사는 이런 식으로 사스케를 끊임없이 들볶았다.
"그리운거야?"
사쿠라는 컵에 뜨거운 물을 담아오며 말했다.
"아니, 그냥 둘러보고 있었을 뿐이야."
사스케는 잔을 받아들고 차를 타기 시작했다. 그러나 사스케는 사쿠라가 자신을 쳐다보고 있는 것을 의식하고 있었다. 사쿠라는 사스케의 얼굴을 빤히 쳐다보고 있었다.
"무슨 일이지?"
"당신, 머리가 조금 자랐는데."
"…………?"
사스케는 차에 비친 자신의 얼굴을 본다. 사진보다 꽤나 자라있었다.
"내가 잘라줄게."
"아니―"
사스케는 거절하려 했으나, 곧 그만뒀다.
"아, 그래, 고마워."
"알았어, 준비해야 하니까 조금만 기다려."
사스케는 다시 사진으로 눈돌리기 전, 콧노래를 부르면서 걸어가는 자기 아내를 보았다. 사진 속에서, 사라다는 정말로 긴장되고 진지한 얼굴을 하고 있다.
사라다가 화내면서 사스케를 불렀을 때의 표정은 역겹다는 듯한 표정과는 달라보였었다.
"됐다, 이리 와봐."
사스케가 돌아보면 방 한가운데에 천이 깔려 있고 그 위에는 의자가 놓여있었다.
"그래."
사스케는 겉옷을 벗어, 사진 옆에 두고, 의자에 앉았다.
"왼쪽은 눈을 덮을 정도로 자르면 되는거지?"
사쿠라는 사스케의 머리를 다듬으며 다시 콧노래를 부르기 시작했다.
"이봐..."
"당신은 정말 사라다한테서 영향을 받은거야?"
사스케는 갑작스레 날아든 사쿠라의 질문에 놀랐다.
"카카시가 연락했나?"
"아니, 이런 일은 굳이 물어볼 필요 없는걸."
그녀는 다정하게 말을 이었다.
"그야 우린 결혼한 사이잖아."
사스케는 무언가 말하려 고개를 돌렸다.
"움직이지 말아봐."
사쿠라는 사스케의 고개를 돌렸다. 곧바로, 머리를 자르는 소리가 들린다. 사스케는 말하는 동안 얼굴은 앞을 볼 수 밖에 없었다.
"난 영향같은거 받지 않았어."
"정말로?"
"......"
사스케는 입을 닫았다. 무언가 말해야만 할 것같은 느낌은 들지만, 무슨 말을 해야 좋을지는 몰랐다.
사쿠라는 미소지었다.
"거봐, 역시 영향 받은거잖아."
"아니야 난."
"네 네 네, 움직이지 마세요."
이번에는, 반대편에서 머리를 다듬는 소리가 들렸다. 사스케는 입을 다물고 계속 침묵하고 있다.
"사춘기일까... 말로 풀어갈 수 있다면 정말 좋을텐데."
그러면서 사쿠라는 사스케의 머리를 빗었다.
"사라다는 다른 애들보다 아빠를 더 원하고 있어. 평소에는 아빠를 볼 수 없어도 잘 있지만, 사라다는 어떻게 하면 자기 아빠보다 강해질 수 있을지 는 생각하고 있어... 맞아, 이건 그거하고도 조금 닮았네."
사쿠라는 이건 자랑하는 것처럼 보이려나? 하고 생각했다. 사쿠라는 수줍게 미소지었다.
그것때문에, 사라다는 뭔가가 완벽하지 않다고 볼 때면, 꼭 자기 환상이 깨진 것같다고 느껴. 귀엽다니까[각주:1], 정말. 사치스러운 걱정이지.
사쿠라는 사스케의 어깨 위에 떨어진 머리카락을 쓸어냈다.
"사라다는 당신이 평소 어떻게 지내는지 몰라. 당신이 뭘 해야 하는지 확신할 수는 없지만, 사라다 곁에 함께 있어줘야 해."
사쿠라는 사스케의 어깨에서 손을 뗐다.
"사라다가 원하는 건 당신이 어렸을 때 아버지로부터 원했던 거랑 똑같을거야, 그렇지?"
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Sarada: This is the first time I’ve heard about this.
Sasuke: I’ve only told a few people. Also, this isn’t a great time to say this.
Also, at that time, he thought differently.
Sasuke throws the shuriken in his hand again, with Sarada doing the same quickly after. The two clash and fall into the river.
Sarada: Cheh….
Sasuke narrows his eyelids and the ends of his mouth tug up slightly. While his intention is to smile, Sarada interpreted this as him looking down on her. Sarada smirks and then throws three shuriken.
Clang clang clang
Sarada: Huh?!
Sarada runs out of shuriken. They were all knocked away by the shuriken in his hand, and he only used one shuriken to knock out three. She looks at him in astonishment.
Sasuke: ….Hn.
This time he isn’t smiling. He laughs nasally. (more of a chuckle than a laugh I’d say)
Sarada closes her eyes. And when she opens again, her iris turns red - it's her father's eye, the sharingan.
Sarada: Don't look down on me..
Her hands, full of shuriken, crossed before her chest.
Sarada: Here it is!
Sarada casts the shuriken one after another, again and again, The weapons comes forward to sasuke like the rain, but he knocked out every of them as if they are nothing. Sasuke speaks in the sound of the crashing metals,
Sasuke: The hokage that I wanted to be... is distorted.
Sarada: I won't be distracted, don't say it now.
Sarada says as she continues her practice. But Sasuke did not stop.
Sasuke: But I have a friend who pulled me back to the right track. Moving forward, showing me the path with light. That guy.
Sarada: What have you been saying from the start? Are you proud of having been a bad guy, or are you proud of wour friend?
Sasuke: Not someone to take pride in, he's just an usuratonkachi who rushs all the way to where he thinks it is right.
Sarada: I don't understand!
Sasuke: You, looking at the back of him, will not go to the wrong way like me. You will surely become a great hokage.
Sarada: huh?
Sasuke: I will support you, don't ne discouraged.
He never thought that he could show her his support like this.
Sarada's shuriken goes out of target and accidentally cut off the rope of the board. Within a second the board is swallowed by the river. It follows the flow of the water and drifts toward the watherfall.
Sarada: ahh...
While Sarada's hand goes strengthless, releasing her shuriken,
Sasuke: Giving up?
He holds her hands tight and stops her.
Sarada pulls back looking at him, smiling as if she doesn't care.
Sarada: I said, don't look down on me.
Holding her shuriken, she immediately ran to the waterfall. Her sharingan spots the falling board, and with in a second she throws out a shuriken. However, the board is falling too fast that the shuriken fails to reach it. Sarada bites her lips, feeling upset.
Sho-
Sasuke casts a shuriken behind his daughter and it clashes with Sarada's.
Dong-
And then there's sound of wood being pierced.
Sarada looks down to river searching for the board. It was there floating, with a shuriken spearing its bullseye.
Sarada: Papa... sugoi...
Sasuke: Not mine, it's yours.
Sarada finally fells relieved that her papa isn't acting or speaking weird anymore. Looking at his daughter's cheerful smile, Sasuke remembers what his wife said.
"What Sarada truly want must be the same as anata you in your childhood-the acknowledgement from your your father, isn't it right?"
He remembered the effort he has put to gaun his father's recognition.
Sasuke: As I expected, you-
Thinking that this is not the words for one who simply hits the bullseye of the target, he swallows back the words and turns into silence. This sentence is for something more special, for a dream coming true.
Sarada: ...?
Bewildered by sudden silence, Sarada speaks.
Sarada: Ahhh- I'm really hungry after the training. Why don't you buy me some sweets, like apple candies?
Her smile slowly disappears, seeing her father's expression.
Sarada: Are you leaving now?
Sasuke: Ahh, I'm just here for the report, not staying long.
Sarada: So... when will you send a report again?
Sasuke: Who knows
He walks into the forest, feeling that Sarada has something to say. But the sound of sobbing turns him back. Sarada takes off and wipes her glasses in panick.
Sasuke: ......
Once again back to her side, he raises his finger towards her forehead.
Sarada: Slipping away with the poke again?
He stops. This time putting his hand on her shoulder.
Sasuke: Not the forehead poke.
He kneeled down to the same height as Sarada's.
Sasuke: It's Katon.
He says to Sarada, looking into her eyes.
Sasuke: Next time when I'm baxk, I'll teach you Katon.
And them he gives her a gentle smile.
Despite drifting off a bit, she replies him with a sweet, sweet smile.
원문은 샨나로. 빌어먹을 녀석/바보같아 등등으로 의역하려 했는데 딸을 두고 하는 말 치고는 너무 과격해보여서 순화했습니다. [본문으로]
제4차 닌계대전으로부터 1년 후의 이야기. 6대 호카게로 취임하게 되는 날이 가까워지는 카카시. 파도의 나라의 극비 비행선 '비호환(飛鯱丸)'에 탑승하여, 인질 구출 임무를 맡게 된 그는, 그곳에서 마음이 얼어붙은 슬픈 닌자와 대치한다. 친구의 눈과 함께 번개를 베어 가르던 기술도 잃은 자신이 과연 사람을 지킬 수 있는 것인가. 아득한 하늘에서 붙잡은 '불의 의지'라는 것은. 카카시가 새로운 닌자의 시대를 개척해간다. NARUTO 비전 제1탄.
